nf rax again

i feel like posting this here

 

I like how the hydraulic rams would go straight through the treads when they retract and are attached to a wafer thin bit of metal covering the treads rather than the main body of the tank.

 

i removed them 3 days ago, they where silly but where added to see if it was possible to pull off the look with them

although its possible, it looks like sjhite

 

Well yeah because you stuck them on in a really stupid place, they'd look much better if you put a bit more effort into it.

 

Chris I love your work but, I hate how you rip other peoples work to shreds. How about a nice comment saying "hey that looks good. how about doing this to fix that?"

 

Saying something looks good is completely unhelpful, telling people exactly what's wrong with it is what makes it possible to fix it. If people post simply to tell me something looks good I find it very annoying. I already know exactly how good it looks. I also usually get annoyed when people post with suggestions but that's because I also almost always know exactly what needs doing and how to do it. I am however, conscious of the fact that not everyone is as fortunate as me in that respect, so I take care to explain in minute detail exactly what is wrong with everything I see. In this instance the OP has actually improved since the previous attempt, therefore I felt an acknowledgement of that improvement was merited, so I gave it, in addition to a lot of stuff explaining what is still wrong with it.

 

What if it doesn't look good?

 

It's a trap. It's used by women coming fresh from the hair stylist.

You never ever tell them that it doesn't look good. EVER.

...thus it became normal socially accepted behaviour etc etc...

 

I do.

Usually by making a comparison to some sort of plant or dog.

 

I like it.

 

You need more details to give it life and change the sizes a little.
The current sandbags are bigger than a man, judging by the entrance. Make the entire structure bigger or make the sandbags smaller.

Add busted-open box to one side, shot open sandbags, sandbags with different sacks and make them interact with each other more, add some seams to them... maybe a painted on NF emblem on the sandbags, the wall or something.