Freestyle Writing (Feel free to post)

Discussion in 'Worldbuilding' started by BoF, Sep 11, 2006.

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  1. BoF

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    This thread I'm gonna use to create a story from Empires, and YOU guys are going to help. Just post a sentence that'll keep the story going. (And I do hope it's a friggin sentence, notta paragraph sized sentence!) It can be funny too, like Shawn of the Dead funny, not Jackass funny.

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    The winds rolled over the dunes as the smell of burning rubber wafted through the glaring nostrils of Major Wight.
     
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  2. Trid3nt

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    His gaze watched firm over his labouing soldiers' backs.
     
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  3. HungryGuy

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    As they reloaded tha masive artillery guns.
     
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    that had fallen over after being hit by n00bs in dropships.
     
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  5. HungryGuy

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    These is the rules set by the thead starter

    [wisper]I loled though[/wisper]
     
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  6. Trid3nt

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    Soon they fired their giant payloads, Destroying the northern faction base and slaugtering many
     
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    The NF commander barked into the radio, demanding air support to repel the Brenodi artillery that was cutting his troops apart. Base command was unable to send air support as they were already busy fending off a group of enemy bombers targetting their position.
     
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    The Base command operator suddenly felt a coldness on the other end of the line: "hello, hello?"
    but the NF commander wasn't going to reply: he was staring directly down the barrel of...
     
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  9. Trid3nt

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    A Brenodi Scout's Pistol. Immediately..
     
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  10. Slithzerikai

    Slithzerikai I for one am glad the NF SMG 3 is gone

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    He would duck in an instinctual reflex to avoid the dishonourable death, darting through his tent whilst-
     
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    grabing a new knife to replace the one protruding from his would be assasin, bellowing orders as he went.
     
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  12. Trid3nt

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    While more High Explosive shells landed all around

    Off Topic: why 'would'? slith?
     
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  13. Pope_Homeless_XIII

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    He hauled ass into a fresh crater, which contained...
     
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    a unexploaded shell, which he accidently...
     
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    tripped over...
     
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    which saved his life as a-
     
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    bullet whizzed over his head, grazing the top of his helmet, he then glanced over towards the shell and......
     
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  18. grayclay88

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    watched another one fly towards it. he jumped up and-

    -offtopic-
    i love these threads, especially if someone puts it all together. lets keep it going
     
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    climbed out of the the crater & ran toward the nearest...
     
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  20. grayclay88

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    bunker, and hunkered down while artillery blasted around him. as he was listening to the rumble, and constant screams of his allies, he-
     
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