Thought I might write these out. The boss is out and i'm bored. If any of these contradict other things already said then start yelling.
I'd change "entire fields were burnt to the ground" to "entire farming colonys were burnt to the ground" just because it sounds more indescriminant and brutal... other than that it all sounds good. I really like finding out about the story of empires, this is great
Oh yeah, it all looks very good Duke save for the explination of the flag. I had explained that the square that is broken into 3 peices represents the factions of Jekotian power, with the largest chunk being the Northern Faction. The Jekotian flag had only one star, the other two were added to symbolize the oppressed farmers on the one hand and craftsmen on the other. Later, when the war becomes stalemated and a Jekotian civilian goverment is reestablished, the original flag is re-adopted with the two headed eagle but rather than one star there are three out of respect for the NF. Rest of it looks great though.
your second last paragraph on the first post could use some grammatical work. not as much as I first thought, maybe i read too fast