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Discussion in 'Worldbuilding' started by Shinzon, Jul 14, 2006.

  1. ARN13

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    I'm already making my own comic, with it's own story. My comic is about the BE's 13th Legion, commanded by Feldmarschall Paul Kaufmann (I wanted the BE to have a German-style feel to them because they DO look German.)

    So far, they were en route to the BE outpost "Jericho" in the harsh desert world of Hal Shaddar. They come across a ruined town with its inhabitants brutally slaughtered, who could have done this? The BEs clean up the place and burn the dead so they can set up an encampment there to rest. Then the next day, BE scouts report spotting an NF army comprised of 10,000 men and 120 armored vehicles. The Feldmarschall orders the men to barricade the entrances and prepare for the assault. The BE has 12,00 men and 110 vehicles.

    I stopped from there, but I want to depict intense battles like people would expect from WH40k. With the brutal hand-to-hand combat and crazy firefights. I've never done anything like this in my life so every care has been taken to making the comic realistic and gruesome (well not that gruesome) as possible.It just takes a long time :D
     
  2. DeadReckoning

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    Awsome :D im trying to put a fun... weird style into mine.... << that wont interfere with anystory, thats why their in a stupid outpost far away hehe also looking for a winter style map that'll work for it << over at the facepunch forums <<
     
  3. Carrigage

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    haha, I could make that happen :p
     
  4. Carrigage

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    Well.. Might not be all that funny, but it's all I've got...
    And yeah, I realized that the green text is awkward to read...

    Sorry :P

    Oh, and no offense to you MrBojangl3s with this comic, lol :D

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  5. Trid3nt

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    So Wrong, and yet so terrible funny
     
  6. Trid3nt

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  8. Trid3nt

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    [​IMG]

    FINALLY FINSIHED THE PILOT... bored now :P
     
  11. cpugeek

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    put them all together into one image, its kinda annoying having to open them all individually
     
  12. DeadReckoning

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    ya, i couldnt really tell what was going on << a bit confusing, but still kinda cool :)
     
  13. Carrigage

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    A bunch of retards who cant stand properly are secretly grouping at location; unknown.

    Are they planning to take over teh world? are they conspiracing against the big Brenodi Government?

    NO! They are discussing ways to kill the NF!

    And all of a sudden, an Artillery shell hits the ground, but misses the retards... The Brenodi Artillery commanders are crying :(
     
  14. Trid3nt

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    :( mean


    And i dont know how to make it one image (~help plz)
     
  15. Flolou

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    Could you just write a little bigger in the screens that we could reduce the pictures size and stick them without making a so huge picture.

    edit:
    Trident's comic on 1 picture (1.9M)
     
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    I thought it was really good! well done, it's one of the most promising ideas I've seen. except for release 1.07 ;)
     
  17. DeadReckoning

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    ahaha i got bored so i felt like doing this XD its stupid -.- my paint skills are leet holmes :) j/k they suck ._.

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  18. Shinzon

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    Well after reading don megel's story, I tried making the wasteland he described in his story... all in all I think I compleatly messed up...

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  19. Carrigage

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    I dont know if you noticed Shinzon, but you had a small guest starring in my latest comic strip.. :p

    Anyway, I got bored, put this together in 5 mins.. I think it's quite true :D

    And that picture Shinzon, looks friggin' awesome! :eek:

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  20. TrItOn

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    Yes!

    Can I be the engy? lol Sometimes like that playin' Empires.
     

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