New and improved background story of CEL

Discussion in 'Worldbuilding' started by vlamnire, Jan 6, 2010.

  1. vlamnire

    vlamnire Member

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    I wrote a new story that is much more descriptive then the previous version.

    The Chrono Empire was an empire not like any other, in the fact that our Empire spanned through many ages. How we achieved this you ask? Our Empire was based off a technology we’ve developed that allowed us to travel through time. The branch of this Empire in this day and age of Jekotia and Brenodi war has been destroyed. The Brenodi wanted a way to stop Jekotia from ever being created, but they could not find a way to do this. Brenodi scanners detected a large energy burst in what was marked as a remote area on Brenodi intel maps. They sent a scout team to check out this energy blast, what they found amazed them. They found an entire city of people that seemed to be much superior in technology then Brenodi was. After the scouts reported back to Brenodi intelligence they organized a squad to take the city and its technology. We had intel drones that the scouts did not see patrolling our city. These drones alerted the city people that there was a large militant force approaching. Since we did not have anything to defend ourselves with, everyone evacuated into the time warp machine. Everyone was sent to a new chapter in the Chrono Empire history.

    Two people stayed behind though and they were captured. They were thrown in prison but not for long. They escaped from the Brenodi prison with a specialized tool they hid on them. These two took different paths after they broke out though; one joined Northern Faction in order to find members to join the new Chrono Empire chapter called the Chrono Elite Legion (the first militant Chrono force). The other joined Brenodi with the same goal.
     
  2. Sandbag

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    amazing
     
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  4. Jessiah

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    Srsly dude, stop making new threads, it's unnecessary spam. You have 6 on the front page of Clans, and not one of them is a unique topic. They all continue another topic you made <_<
     
  5. vlamnire

    vlamnire Member

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    I just wanted some feedback on the new story
     
  6. LordDz

    LordDz Capitan Rainbow Flowers

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    Post in in one of your threads then.
     
  7. blizzerd

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    but people are not interested enough to read the old thread again when he adds stuff

    /cycle of violence commences
     
  8. Ikalx

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  9. Theowningone

    Theowningone Noone likes me :'(

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    QFT [​IMG]
     
  10. Maxaxle

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    I come into this forum looking for gameplay balancing.
     

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