Empires World

Discussion in 'Worldbuilding' started by manonthemoon, Mar 19, 2007.

  1. manonthemoon

    manonthemoon Member

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    Here is a loose storyline I threw together. I'm not sure what kind of stuff you guys want so I'm not going to spend too much time on my first draft. Let me know what you think of it and I'll either let it fall into oblivion or elaborate/proof as necessary.

    I've left out a lot of details like names (like the name of the planet), dates, specifics, etc and it reads more informative than dramatic or storyline sort of material.

    (trying to make it readable with carriage returns)
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    The Empires world is one ravaged by warfare that has erupted out of the
    failure of the Global Alliance twenty years prior to the current day.
    After the global disarmnement of the late 20th century a few years of
    peace were endured until resource allottment became an issue of debate
    so intense that borders were redrawn correlating to regions which shared
    an interest in the consolidation of dwindling supplies to sustain life
    and a still-expanding population.

    Temperature fluxuations across the Empires world are so drastic and
    unpredictable that getting food, supplies and fuel to regions which
    require it are equal to if not more than the cost of blood on the
    battlefield. It was ten years of strife against the elements and
    continued loss of life due to starvation that rotted the Global Alliance.

    Meek rationing effected regions with equal distribution, causing massive
    malnutrition effecting muscular and mental capabilities of the populace
    at large.

    Disproportionate rationing effected other regions creating divisive
    class differences which led to rioting between those without and those
    with supplies.

    Eventually the divisiveness rotted the Global Alliance to the core
    until two regions were but the only pillars which held it together.

    Western powers collected into a brief alliance under a central authority.
    It underwent a violent creation and after many assassinations in the
    course of three months, emerged with a strong central leadership that
    did not persist in or create an image of Imperical rule at first, so
    went largely unnoticed by the rest of the world, including the loosely
    knit regions in the East.

    In Eastern powers violence and uprising surged across the lands without
    a central point -rendering it incapable of unified action and entering a
    dark age. What little technological advancement was left in the world
    halted in what became known as the Northern alliance.

    Each force was focused upon a seperate area of the world, unique from
    the other in ways which polarized and contrasted. These two powers held
    peace for five years before subtle, tactical and secretive wars broke
    out between the two in locations which contained large quantities of
    resources.

    At first small groups under the two Empires set out on missions of
    espionage to redirect trade routes and influence leaders to redirect
    allottment of rationing. This lasted until the Eastern powers stumbled
    upon an operation in effect on a resource area under their direction
    and determined that it was a deliberate assault from the collection of
    rulers in the West.

    Western leadership denied this, having no knowledge of the operations
    of the resource owners in it's borders. However, a force was made from
    the Eastern leadership calling itself the Northern Alliance with a
    mission to unify the East and fight against the Western powers to secure
    and protect resources for it's own starving and malnurished masses.

    The west quickly remilitarized in response to protect its resource directors.
    Many died due to the priority of military power over rationing. These
    deaths were massive but, spread across the region and generated conflict
    between small states more violent than in the Eastern world. Many small
    region-states joined the Northern Alliance for protection and took in their
    share of those bent on destruction of the West in the agreements.

    The Western central authority was cooped by a military leader, declaring
    a new Imperical rule known as the Bernodi Empire and used a collection of
    military powers to crush uncooperative and beligerent renegade forces
    within the Empire. War against the Northern Alliance broke out.

    The empire began with the advantage of a fully funded, fully fed military
    and a central leadership. Yet it did not have the mass of the giant
    Northern Alliance.



    War is conducted to secure resources. To do so otherwise, is to submit to
    the enemy both power and influence. Resources are survival.

    Due to the massive deaths which are sustained from redirection of funding
    to military power, battlefield expenditures are maintained by conquest.
    Only by securing additional resource-rich regions is the creation of vehicles
    and weaponry possible.

    Enormous solar flares contribute to the violent atmosphere of the Empires
    world. These unfortunately disrupt communications equipment and the means
    to power them, so data must be modular and portable rather than remote.
    This means that battlefield commanders must use some inhibiting and bulky
    equipment to store tactical, and structural data for the combat environment.
    Bringing battlefield technology into production takes a "research" station
    which recreates the necessary information from special equipment that will
    not fail in the fluxuating atmospheric conditions.
     
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  2. Niarbeht

    Niarbeht Member

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    Did you read anything Megel wrote?
     
  3. Bodrick

    Bodrick Ye Olde Supermod

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    Interesting :p

    It's always good to have a different take on things :)
     
  4. Pimp Recruit (formerly Don Music)

    Pimp Recruit (formerly Don Music) Member

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    Scatmans World!

    Ok .. bad joke.

    At least you've paragraphed it. ;)
     
  5. Pope_Homeless_XIII

    Pope_Homeless_XIII Member

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  6. Private Sandbag

    Private Sandbag Member

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    that's a really cool story, please add more.
     
  7. FalconX

    FalconX Developer

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    The Storyline page on the site has the official story that Krenzo came up with, if you're wondering what the the devs were thinking for the mod. It describes the world on which Empires takes place, and gives some of the background behind the two armies that now face off. If you want some direction that would be the place to start.

    With that said, interesting scenario.
     
  8. Niarbeht

    Niarbeht Member

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    You could probably shelve that actually and use some of the elements for some later project you come across/get involved in. I must say if Empires didn't already have a backstory, that would be a good start.
     
  9. Evan

    Evan League Commissioner

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    Commonwealth Warriors are the army of that island complex in the southeast (South Islands) --> [​IMG]
     
  10. Solokiller

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    You mean the South Islands?
    I made some edits to that picture, for my NF campaign maps, which is just an idea, nothing official:
    [​IMG]
     
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  11. Evan

    Evan League Commissioner

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    I said that
     
  12. Evan

    Evan League Commissioner

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    That's Brenodi land (see the purple)
     
  13. Evan

    Evan League Commissioner

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    Anybody know what the little tiny itsy bitsy text for some of the town names says?
     
  14. DonMegel

    DonMegel Member

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    Koln pass, Glycen, Ronin, I know these places, they are my home...and I have a much bigger version of the map...
     
  15. Evan

    Evan League Commissioner

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    Post a link! :D
     
  16. FalconX

    FalconX Developer

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    Some of the classics are there. I lost my copy of it though. :(
     
  17. Niarbeht

    Niarbeht Member

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    Classics? Are these things that need re-mapped?

    And is there a river in NF territory that happens to have a town on it?

    A town that's had the crap shelled out of it?
     

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